Kia ora, I am a student at Rāwhiti School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, September 17, 2018
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Your penguin looks great Aidan - lots of bright colours. What do you think worked well? Have you thought about making the pieces of paper in your collage smaller next time? It might make it easier to get strong lines and fill the spaces.
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DeleteYour pengren likes great.Bat Aidan you did to big pieguin
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