Kia ora, I am a student at Rāwhiti School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Saturday, May 23, 2020
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Hi Aidan, I like the images in your comic and that you have kept your speech bubble clear and simple. It is easy to follow the story. What made you choose a fire scene? Were you inspired by the Australian bush fires? They would have been really scary!
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DeleteKia Ora Aidan,
ReplyDeleteGood work on your comic. You did well with providing credits at the end, I liked that. I also like the way you provided real photos of bush fires in the background. Is fire fighting something your interested in when you are older?
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DeleteThey turn in to zombies thats scary. Its reminds me of i ant gonna say cause the teachers mite get mad. Next time try to make it less slides. :)
ReplyDeleteHi Aidan. I really like the comic you made. It was a bit long though.How long did it take? i liked it when the fireman helped the guy.
ReplyDeletehello Liam thanks for the comment it probably took me about 3-4 months
Deleteto create. If you have any ideas for a new comic you can ask me any time
Hi Aidan I really like your anmashen it is so funny and cool I really liked the part when they turned into zombies it is awesome maybe next time you could make it re colorful and why did you do so many episodes and saying the end and then its not why did you make the anamasen from Bridie😛
ReplyDeleteHi Aidan l like the Comic but maybe next time you should make it shorter.
ReplyDeleteKia ora, I'm Sahil from Yaldhurst Model School. I liked the part when the shark had a jetpack on his back. It was funny he went really fast. When I look at your post, it reminds me of when I did an animation that was 200 slides long. Maybe next time, you could spend more time on your animation and add details so it can be a little bit better. I liked your animation. How long did it take to make this animation? From Sahil
ReplyDeleteHi Adian I like your comic. It Reminds me of a movie calls
ReplyDelete"fantastic 4."
How long did it take to get this far?.
Hello Leon, Thanks for commenting I've also seen fantastic 4. It took About 5 months to complete it.
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