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Friday, March 6, 2020

Cute dog

We are writing 100 word story's this is one of mine. We had to write about an oops moment and use lots of describing words.
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  1. PaulApril 17, 2020 at 7:41 AM

    Thanks for sharing your story Aidan. It reads to me a bit like a movie script. I could paint a picture in my head about what was happening. Have you got any more stories to share?

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  2. AnonymousMay 25, 2020 at 2:40 PM

    ill see

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  3. AnonymousJune 9, 2020 at 2:47 PM

    Hi Aidan E I am Paige R Thanks for sharing your story Aidan. It reads to me a bit like a movie script. I could paint a picture in my head about what was happening. Have you got any more stories to share?

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  4. AnonymousJune 25, 2020 at 2:34 PM

    kai ora riley here. This story shows a nice little character. It reminds me a lot of tom and jerry but with those dogs. Like this one day tom threw it over and jerry took it.

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  5. AnonymousJuly 1, 2020 at 2:18 PM

    Hi Aidan I like the story and I have used writing legends before I have wrote a story with stripey before. And how did you get throw the dog/cat door I am impressed and was it like a hose where you went thruu or was it like a shid?

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