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Monday, July 20, 2020

snow adventure with Leon

On Thursday 16th July me and Leon went to the snow. It took about 1 and a half hours to get to the snow 
and 1 and half hours to get back we watched Jumanji on my DVD player. Once at the snow it was snowing it wasn't that cold then but it was 8࿁ we went for a little drive to find snow but all we could find was small thin layers of snow so we had to go to the ski field. Once there we had a little snack and pumped up the rubber doughnut and walked up to the snow it was really hard work we slipped over a few times on the ice and had a snow fight. Then we got on the rubber doughnut and it all went well until we relisted we couldn't steer then it slowly went towards the rocks so I jumped of the doughnut and it went forwards and I landed on the ice and snow "phew that wasn't as painful as I thought" I had open my big mouth I got up and slipped over "ouch". We wanted to touch real snow but the real snow was in the skis only area when we thought we wouldn't get to touch real snow it started to snow again "YAY real snow". Back at the car we had another snack and a drink and went back home this time we watched Jumanji the next level.

2 comments:

  1. Hello Aidan nice capitals i like the writing really impressed on how you wrote your story hope use guy a a really fun day.

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  2. Hi Aidan, You have written a great recount on your adventure to the snow. Funny how any time we say something doesn't hurt...bam! we do something that does. Excellent work.

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