Kia ora, I am a student at Rāwhiti School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, July 20, 2020
snow adventure with Leon
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Hello Aidan nice capitals i like the writing really impressed on how you wrote your story hope use guy a a really fun day.
ReplyDeleteHi Aidan, You have written a great recount on your adventure to the snow. Funny how any time we say something doesn't hurt...bam! we do something that does. Excellent work.
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