Crash the haunted house ripped out of the ground leaving not a trace it's still there but floating 10 meters off the ground will it ever come down. "Mum im late for school were is my bag and the dog?" woof woof the dog barked "he's out side ill go get him" woof woof woof barked the dog again "um I don't think this is normal the house is floating". As the house floats in the air will the boy come up with a plan to get to school " aha mum get the ladder" "what are you doing young chap" "im getting to school" "why do you need a ladder" " maybe it's just better if you look at this yourself" "oh".
Hi Aidan!
ReplyDeleteAwesome story! I love how creative the concept is. Just remember for next time to start on a new line when someone new is speaking and to make it very clear who is speaking.
From Mak :)
Hi Aidan
ReplyDeleteI love this story hope your looking forward to coming to Tangaroa next year
Hi adian I liked your long story.
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