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Thursday, September 17, 2020

Quick Write (Ghostly street lamp)

 It was a dark night in the city of ghosts where weird things happen every day. *Screech clank* the light slowly and loudly bends in a purulence way two young girls reach towards the ghost lamp and the a car comes. The light picks up the girls and moves them to the side of the road and goes back to it's normal position  like nothing happens at all. It's like it was a dream or was it? I wake up in...

2 comments:

  1. Hi Aidan, You have used some great describing words in this piece of writing. I wonder where you woke up?

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  2. Aidan I like how u describe it. it was great

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