House in the rain forest hidden away from society and concealed in a glass dome so no one can find him. "Oooowwwowow" howls a wolf as night falls on planet earth the survivor of the harsh storm sleeps in the shack of mystery waiting for day time.
Kia ora, I am a student at Rāwhiti School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, December 1, 2020
Hidden Shack
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Kia ora Aidan. I really like your story because you added some describing words into your story. This reminds me of a quick write I made. Where did you find this picture? I also like how you put some paragraphs into this story I find it hard to do that. Great job.
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