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Monday, December 7, 2020

Noice View From Up Here (Up In The Clouds)

"Okay were here the tallest tower in the world ready to climb it", "you bet I am...  here's the elevator to go to roof level". *Ding* "wow that tower is huge luckily there's a ladder there to get up to it". "Phew that took longer than I thought but still want to climb it?" "of course I do"

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Aidan. I really like your story because you added lots of describing words. This reminds me of a quick write I did. Where did you get that picture from? maybe next time you could add a paragraph so does easier to read.

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