The storm died down before it got to the sky ladder but enough about the ladder you are probably wondering whats in the house well if I can show you if I find the key... um I don't exactly have it right now so yeah sorry it's in the house but there is a open window I think.
Yes there was lets have a look oh there's only a huge vault not much sorry for wasting your time well you decided to read this it's your fault actually. =)
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Hi Aidan I like the story because you used lots of describing words. It reminds me of a story that I did. What made you choose this picture.
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ReplyDeleteThis story is awesome, it fits with the picture perfectly too.
It makes me think of when I had to climb up a scary ladder at home.
Maybe try and make the story make more sense because i'ts kind of confusing.
Hi Aidan Maybe re read the first couple of sentences Like it says "I.Crack " you should have put it like this " . I Crack " so if you could fix that I would be grateful.
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