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Friday, October 16, 2020

Description Fairground

I could see the bright flashing lights from a mile away, getting closer and closer. Stabbing rainbow lights were blinding me as I was heading towards the fairground. The glowing pink smoke coloured the night sky, the giant ferris wheel spinning round and round. As I arrived I saw the excitement on peoples’ faces.

As I entered the carnival, I could smell the buttery popcorn and the fresh hotdogs just out of the oven. I wanted some so bad but the long curvy line was just too long and they would have been gone by the time I got there. Then all the people left because it took too long, it was just my luck then I realised they left because there’s no popcorn left.

As I approached the ferris wheel, I was intimidated by the size. Everyone was screaming when they reached the top. I got on but I was nervous that I would get stuck at the very top screech! The bright blue ferris wheel stopped, I got shivers down my spine I thought that i’ll be stuck for eternity but as my fears get the most of me, the massive ferris wheel starts to move again.

Just as I was about to leave, more popcorn was just made. I got the biggest amount I could get. Everyone was staring at me like they wanted the salty popcorn so I ran to the roller coaster, and when I made it to the tippy top I ate the popcorn so nobody could get it, it was the best popcorn I ever had. Swoosh! The roller coaster zoomed down the track and all the popcorn fell out of the container. Everyone caught the popcorn and ate it. “NOOO all my popcorn it’s all lost”. 

As I left the carnaval, I heard everyone screaming as they went down the roller coaster just like me. Same with the ferris wheel, everyone screamed as they reach the top, that was fun i would do that again soon.

2 comments:

  1. Kia ora Aidan. I really like your story. How long did it take you to finish it? it reminds me of when i did my report. use paragraphs again because it looks really good.

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  2. Hi aidan I like how your doing longer writing now keep it up.

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