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Monday, October 12, 2020

The Stupid Kids

Swoosh the crystal blue plane reflecting the fluffy clouds and traveling at speed of sound the engines screaming loud as the plane cross the ocean at full speed. The windows block most of the earpiercing noise from the engines.


"Wait a minuet there is two young kids on the left wing of the plane how did they?"... I must be seeing things "whoa" said one of the kids "look at view I can almost see my house from here" screech one the young kids slipped off the wing of the plane and he...

 DUN DUN DUN.

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2 comments:

  1. BeckyOctober 13, 2020 at 2:38 PM

    Hi Aidan, your descriptive writing is very good. I love how you have used words like 'fluffy' and 'crystal blue' to help create a picture. Good work.

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  2. AnonymousOctober 23, 2020 at 9:47 AM

    Hi Aidan. This was a really funny story! Love the descriptive words. Love the title as well!

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