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Friday, October 30, 2020

Quick Write (The Deserts Curse)

 

The lost city of the desert gone for millions of years and finally found, the brave traveler not afraid of the deserts curse that follows you for the rest of your life. Which you won't have soon after.

*CRASH* the ground crushes beneath the brave explorer and traps him deep below the sand, *ROAR* the tigers curse is here will the brave explorer survive this horrible curse? find out in part 2...

1 comment:

  1. G'day Aidan. I like the way you've put in a curse to the story, it makes it a lot more interesting. It reminded me of a abounded desert. Can't wait for part 2!

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